Outcome Map
Clarity: choose an exact verb.
Precision: anchor with a focused noun phrase.
Economy: say the point in one clean sentence.
Verb Families with ready frames
| Family | Core verbs | Model sentence |
|---|---|---|
| Reporting | show, suggest, argue, highlight, indicate, demonstrate | The data indicate a steady rise in rural internet access. |
| Change | increase, decrease, decline, rise, fall, stabilise, fluctuate | Prices stabilised after 2022. |
| Cause–Effect | cause, lead to, result in, drive, generate, foster | Automation leads to gains in efficiency. |
| Comparison | exceed, lag, match, differ, resemble | Female participation exceeded male participation in 2024. |
| Evaluation | improve, undermine, strengthen, hinder, facilitate | Subsidies facilitate small business growth. |
| Method | collect, analyse, measure, estimate, model | The study analysed 500 survey responses. |
Upgrade weak pairs
do → conduct, perform
get → obtain, receive
make → produce, create
put → place, set
show up → appear, emerge
Noun phrase frames that sound academic
- the + adjective + noun + of + noun
- the rapid expansion of urban areas
- head noun + preposition chain
- a rise in energy demand among households
- quantifier + of + noun + in + time/place
- a majority of respondents in 2024
- V-ing as subject
- Increasing tuition fees affects enrolment
- Nominalisation pair
- X leads to Y → the effect of X on Y
Use nominalisations selectively. Prefer a clear verb when possible.
- X leads to Y → the effect of X on Y
Compact swaps
a lot of problems → numerous problems
very big impact → significant impact
people who live in cities → urban residents
Sentence blueprints
- Claim + evidence:
Research shows X. This pattern is evident in Y. - Contrast:
While A increases, B remains stable. - Cause → effect:
Policy X results in lower emissions.
Noun phrase version: the reduction in emissions following policy X. - Recommendation:
Governments should allocate funds to address shortages.
Collocation bank
conduct a study | provide evidence | draw a conclusion
pose a risk | exert pressure | reach a consensus
address a challenge | allocate resources | mitigate impact
trigger debate | fuel demand | curb growth
deliver benefits | incur costs | yield results
Use these exactly as pairs for natural tone.
Common mistakes and quick fixes
- Overusing very: replace with a precise adjective.
- Stringing too many of phrases: keep only the essential one.
- Repeating the same verb: rotate within the family.
- Making subjects too long: move heavy detail after the verb.
Example fix
Long: The rapid and significant rise in prices in many cities has caused problems.
Clean: Prices rose sharply in many cities, creating problems.
Mini drills with answers
A. Replace the weak verb
- The graph does a comparison of three sectors.
- Many students get support from loans.
- The policy made changes to the tax rate.
Answers:
- The graph compares three sectors.
- Many students receive support from loans.
- The policy revised the tax rate.
B. Build a compact noun phrase
Prompt: growth + online retail + Asia + 2023
Model: rapid growth of online retail in Asia in 2023
C. Combine two sentences
A rose by 15 percent. B stayed the same.
Model: While A rose by 15 percent, B remained unchanged.
Task focused lines you can paste
Task 1 (charts)
- The proportion of solar power increased steadily, reaching 18 percent by 2024.
- Household spending on food declined, whereas transport grew modestly.
Task 2 (essays)
- Advocates argue that free public transport would reduce congestion by shifting commuters from cars to buses.
- However, limited budgets may hinder implementation in smaller cities.
Quick checklist
- Exact verb selected
- One clean noun phrase, not a chain
- Cause or contrast expressed once
- Wordy pairs trimmed
- Collocation used naturally
Ten minute daily plan
Minute 1–3: swap five weak verbs in yesterday’s writing.
Minute 4–6: create three noun phrases from news headlines.
Minute 7–8: write one contrast sentence and one cause sentence.
Minute 9–10: read aloud and cut extra of phrases.
Pocket list: band safe verbs
show, suggest, indicate, increase, decrease, fluctuate, stabilise, cause, lead to, result in, exceed, differ, improve, undermine, facilitate, collect, analyse, estimate, model, allocate, mitigate
Use this toolkit as a cycle: pick a verb, build the noun phrase, apply one blueprint, then edit for economy.